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Friday 13 September 2013

Mum Stepped.......


Walt: use better words.

Mum stepped in the principal's office. The principal Mum everything about Tommy’s behaviour. Mum was disappointed in Tommy’s behaviour then she punished him for a month.

As they drove back home, Mum was still arguing about Tommy. Mum yelped at Tommy to never be naughty again at school. Tommy afraid of his Mum. Mum was as angry as a big bull. Tommy imagine the looks of Mum’s face if she was a bull with the mist coming out of her enormous nose.

James was all grown up. In college, he got straight A’s in every subject. But the only thing was that he was irresponsible with all his things. There were two great thing about Tommy And James. First James was the enthusiastic and smart. Second Tommy is the naughty and annoying.

As Tommy’s punishment was over he began to be kind and not talking back to Mum. James was getting the hang of it by trying to be responsible for the first time.      


Langa

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