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Saturday 21 September 2013

Ancient Egypt


Langa

Walt: write a well sequence story set in Ancient Egypt.

A famous scribe who couldn’t think of a story.

Late in the afternoon there was a famous scribe who couldn’t think of a story to write about. He went out of the temple and went to stalk at the slaves working how to build up the pyramid. He saw a slave slaking of, then he saw a scary guard. A guard shrieked at the slave to get a move on.

The scribe waked all the way to the Nile River. The scribe saw 8 robbers walking across the river to steal the Egyptians gold. One of the tower watchers alerted the the guards that there were some robbers coming. One guard threw their spears at them. The pointy bit of the spear went straight through one of the robbers shoulder. All the robbers surrendered. After that on the next day, they became slaves. Guards treated them like animals.

The scribe got caught from the tower watcher. One of the tower watcher told one of the guards that there was a stalker. The guard was running a fast as a cheetah. The scribe got away from the guard. He scribe was lost. He had an idea. He said in his mind that the sun always rises in the east. He saw the Nile River close by. He followed the stream all the way to where the Egyptians lived.

The scribe went back to the temple and he wrote a fascinating story about what he did in two days.

The theme of the story is to always think of a story before you write something.   

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