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Sunday 10 November 2013

Burning

Walt: write a narrative.
Enjoying a walk through the park, I see a massive fire at the far end of the park. Walking to check what made the fire to start. The fire went crawling into the new buildings.

I was filled with fear when it struck the buildings. Flames were leaping everywhere.  There were bodies half burned. People  were screaming for help. It was a disaster. I was going to bail them out of the house but I didn’t have the right gear.

Hearing the siren filled everyone up with joy. They were our heroes. It was a sigh of relief. The firefighters arrived and extinguished the flames. An enormous group of paramedics came along with the fire fighters. The paramedics needed help so they told the sad crowd to give them a hand with the bodies.   

It was challenging for the fire stoppers because flames just flew everywhere. They bring the big hose to stop it from burning. It was still no match for the fire fighters. They called for more back up until it began to calm down. Fire fighters just kept coming and coming.  

They took it out. Everyone cheered for the firefighters. As they were packing their equipments, I saw a spark. I went to it and step on it. It was out.  

Langa, your work has improved.

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